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發表於 13-1-7 16:42 |顯示全部帖子
1. Sports Day happens on March 12.
--> Sports Day happens in March 12.

2. At school I learnt a lot of knowledge.
--> At school I have learnt a lot of knowledge.

3. She taught me a lot of knowledge.
--> She teach me a lot of knowledge.

4. At university, she improved her knowledge.
-->唔識改

5. Our teacher has a lot of knowledge.
-->唔識改

6. The buses were full, so I was late for one hour.
-->唔識改

7. "I'm sorry for my late."
--> I'm sorry that I'm late.

8. She led me to an Indian restaurant for lunch.
--> 唔知邊度錯



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發表於 13-1-7 17:26 |顯示全部帖子
pekkle1120 發表於 13-1-7 16:42
1. Sports Day happens on March 12.
--> Sports Day happens in March 12.
有冇好心人幫我睇睇呀?


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親子王國15週年勳章


發表於 13-1-7 18:30 |顯示全部帖子
1. Sports Day happens on March 12.

Sports Day is on the 12th of March.

2. At school I learnt a lot of knowledge.

At school, I learn a lot.

3. She taught me a lot of knowledge.

She taught me a lot.

4. At university, she improved her knowledge.

At university, she extended her knowledge.

5. Our teacher has a lot of knowledge.

Our teacher is very knowledgable.

6. The buses were full, so I was late for one hour.

The buses were full, so I was an hour late.

7. "I'm sorry for my late."

'I'm sorry for being late.'

8. She led me to an Indian restaurant for lunch.
She took me to an Indian restaurant for lunch.


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發表於 13-1-7 18:35 |顯示全部帖子

回覆:請問英文好的jm, 以下的英文咁樣改有冇錯呀?

樓主,妳幫朋友係好,但係連妳自己都唔識解釋比朋友知錯處何在,根本幫唔到佢 improve ,語文/文法好難三言兩語講得到,不如妳叫妳朋友正正經經讀個 course 啦。





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發表於 13-1-7 18:36 |顯示全部帖子
都係你醒, 我睇黎睇去, 句句都怪怪地, 都唔知點入手


別墅

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發表於 13-1-7 18:56 |顯示全部帖子

回覆:pekkle1120 的帖子

之前都有回過你個post。翻譯或者check 文法真係好睇你想表達咩同句子嘅本意。其實如果純粹check文法,一個意思可用多個方法表達,所以你問十個jm, 可能俾十個唔同嘅寫法俾你,最後用邊句真係要問你朋友嘅本意。例如上次講took 同led嘅分別,係意思上嘅分別。用邊個好啲只有你朋友知。


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