本帖最後由 ninjarabbit 於 14-11-24 18:02 編輯
有一個字唔肯定:
A lively one, well prepared
Take care with line endings and slow down a little.
Slow down, shape the poem with pause and try to contrast the rhyme (which?)
Was a little too repetitive at times.
“Nothing in the world is more dangerous than sincere ignorance and conscientious stupidity.”
― Martin Luther King Jr.