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GloriaChung 寫道:
BS
Today Mingpao talked about MoF's hubby's School of Ivy old boys/girls 提供 請鎗服務,真係世界變!![]()
我無條件(not qualified/certified)提供鎗手服務。雖然如此,我的文字(好明顯即係 = 無文彩無料的意思 )您或許讀('拜'讀就不提也罷!) gwa?? :mrgreen: 因為唔作狀?如果唔係做唔成老友記loh..
我的中英文其實都幾差,橙!要跟你 和你的舊同學學! 不過,交貨速度我好您少少ger。即日交貨比老闆,唔會隔3個月咁長ga!![]()
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(kidding!)
which subject you were major in
(i mean bio. or maths
, just a gossip, you need not to answer me ga :-P)
I read it also in this morning kittylock 寫道:
This article is written by my niece....![]()
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GloriaChung 寫道:
BS
Today Mingpao talked about MoF's hubby's School of Ivy old boys/girls 提供 請鎗服務,真係世界變!![]()
我無條件(not qualified/certified)提供鎗手服務。雖然如此,我的文字(好明顯即係 = 無文彩無料的意思 )您或許讀('拜'讀就不提也罷!) gwa?? :mrgreen: 因為唔作狀?如果唔係做唔成老友記loh..
我的中英文其實都幾差,橙!要跟你 和你的舊同學學! 不過,交貨速度我好您少少ger。即日交貨比老闆,唔會隔3個月咁長ga!![]()
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(kidding!)
Holmanma 寫道:
reallyI read it also in this morning
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kittylock 寫道:
This article is written by my niece....![]()
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GloriaChung 寫道:
BS
Today Mingpao talked about MoF's hubby's School of Ivy old boys/girls 提供 請鎗服務,真係世界變!![]()
我無條件(not qualified/certified)提供鎗手服務。雖然如此,我的文字(好明顯即係 = 無文彩無料的意思 )您或許讀('拜'讀就不提也罷!) gwa?? :mrgreen: 因為唔作狀?如果唔係做唔成老友記loh..
我的中英文其實都幾差,橙!要跟你 和你的舊同學學! 不過,交貨速度我好您少少ger。即日交貨比老闆,唔會隔3個月咁長ga!![]()
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(kidding!)
You have a niece who is working already?
Buzz.. Buzzz... Buzzing Bee

kittylock 寫道:
GC,
Yes ah! She is now 24 la!![]()
More on Plain English...
How do you write Plain English?
. analyse your readers' need
. plan carefully what you want to say
. use short sentences
. use strong verbs in the active voice
. use personal pronouns to create a welcoming and direct tone
. remove unneccessary words
. minimise the use of jargons
. break long complex paragraphs into shorter ones
. use bulleted info where possible
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