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發表於 16-2-2 12:54 |只看該作者

引用:Quote:原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表After 

原帖由 QABABY 於 16-02-02 發表
路過~~~如果做office 工要成日sd email 既真係要出去補英文, 估到你寫咩, 但文法詞彙可以寫好啲。 ...
Thanks for your message


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22#
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As per your requested, I have verified the yellow BOM number provided does not match with our system. Attached is an excel file generated from our database for your reference. This information has been confirmed by Raymond.
Should you have any questions, please contact me directly.
Regards,


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23#
發表於 16-2-2 12:55 |只看該作者
***As per your request


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24#
發表於 16-2-2 12:56 |只看該作者

引用:Quote:原帖由+KitAuYeung+於+16-02-02+發表

原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表
yes
因為我係做廠,所以我知道你想講乜





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25#
發表於 16-2-2 12:57 |只看該作者

引用:As+per+your+requested,+I+have+verified+t

原帖由 大將軍 於 16-02-02 發表
As per your requested, I have verified the yellow BOM number provided does not match with our system ...
係該係 BOM number highlighted in yellow




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26#
發表於 16-2-2 12:59 |只看該作者
KitAuYeung 發表於 16-2-2 12:57
係該係 BOM number highlighted in yellow

我以為樓主話yellow BOM 係一件object


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27#
發表於 16-2-2 13:01 |只看該作者
As per your request, I have verified the provided BOM number highlighted in yellow does not match with our system. Attached is an excel file generated from our database for your reference. This information has been confirmed by Raymond.
Should you have any questions, please contact me directly.
Regards,


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發表於 16-2-2 13:05 |只看該作者

引用:After checked, the yellow BOM number w

原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表
After checked, the yellow BOM number with our system are not correct. 

 
咁你唔打埋中文點叫人check


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29#
發表於 16-2-2 13:05 |只看該作者
TV8 發表於 16-2-2 12:00
有冇錯,明唔明
明.........您是否做廠 ?


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30#
發表於 16-2-2 13:27 |只看該作者

回覆:求英文達人

Having checked with our system, we found that the number of BOM in yellow is incorrect.

Please find the attached excel file which I have sent to Raymond for his clarification previously. And he confirmed that the mentioned problem exists.

It would be grateful if you can fix the problem by (date). For further enquiries, please contact me at (email / tel no.)

Thank you!




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發表於 16-2-2 13:50 |只看該作者

引用:Having checked with our system, we found

原帖由 TJ040 於 16-02-02 發表
Having checked with our system, we found that the number of BOM in yellow is incorrect.

Please fin ...
many thanks


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引用:As per your requested, I have verified t

原帖由 大將軍 於 16-02-02 發表
As per your requested, I have verified the yellow BOM number provided does not match with our system ...
many thanks


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33#
發表於 16-2-2 13:54 |只看該作者

引用:After checked,+the+yellow BOM+number+w

原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表
After checked, the yellow BOM number with our system are not correct. 

 
啲gramma錯得好勁喎




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34#
發表於 16-2-2 13:56 |只看該作者

引用:Quote:原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表After 

原帖由 GillianChung 於 16-02-02 發表
啲gramma錯得好勁喎
好想學好D


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35#
發表於 16-2-2 13:58 |只看該作者
TV8 發表於 16-2-2 12:00
有冇錯,明唔明
好錯
每日望住佢哋就充滿力量啦!


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36#
發表於 16-2-2 14:02 |只看該作者

引用:Quote:原帖由 GillianChung 於 16-02-02 發

原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表
好想學好D
唔好意思講句,grammar 錯成咁,真係完全估唔到你講乜……


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37#
發表於 16-2-2 14:06 |只看該作者

引用:After checked,+the+yellow BOM+number+w

本帖最後由 GillianChung 於 16-2-2 14:21 編輯
原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表
After checked, the yellow BOM number with our system are not correct.


我會咁寫:

Dear xxx,

Please kindly note that the BOM number highlighted in yellow is incorrect as it does not match with our system.

Attached please find the excel file for your reference. It has been confirmed by Raymond.

Kindly follow up at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your attention.

Regards,




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38#
發表於 16-2-2 14:07 |只看該作者
如果以樓主平時嘅英文, 我會建議你改成以下句子, 比較簡單易明! 雖然我都可能grammar 唔啱但其實啲外國人都唔一定啱嘅, 宜家唔係考試, 溝通到已經ok

Please kindly note that the highlighted BOM number is not match with our system.

Enclosed the excel file which I have sent to Raymond for confirmation.

Please do not hesitate to contact me for any query.

Thank you
每日望住佢哋就充滿力量啦!


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39#
發表於 16-2-2 14:08 |只看該作者

引用:Quote:原帖由+GillianChung+於+16-02-02+發

原帖由 TV8 於 16-02-02 發表
好想學好D
你去報讀英文書寫班啦,專教寫返工信嗰D




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40#
發表於 16-2-2 14:09 |只看該作者

引用:如果以樓主平時嘅英文,+我會建議你改成以下

原帖由 vickymok717 於 16-02-02 發表
如果以樓主平時嘅英文, 我會建議你改成以下句子, 比較簡單易明! 雖然我都可能grammar 唔啱但其實啲外國人都 ...
呢段文都有grammar mistake呀




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