I trust the world, she has some of good people !
I see the world, she is colourful and beauty !
I hear the world, she make some wonderful melody !
I except every product if it is good !
I believe somebody same !
Don't mind my idea, just talk and share .
I HOPE TO GIVE THE BEST TO MY SON ONLY!
MAY I ?
Who know Avent or Playtex they will produce new bottle of GLASS or PES or PPSU or NEW MATERIAL in future ?
Dr Brown they had PC & PES NOW !
Best wishes to all of mothers & babies!
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你的英文文法好有問題﹐我想你還是用中文寫文章吧。
不是特登去話你的﹐真是出自好心的。每當有人的英文文法錯得好交關﹐但還用英語去同人溝通﹐別人係好辛苦的。It really bothers me when I see people write English like that.
Here's a better version of your "poem" and my little free English lesson for you:
I trust the world, she has some of good people !
--->I believe the world has good people!
I see the world, she is colourful and beauty !
--->I see that the world is colorful and beautiful!
I hear the world, she make some wonderful melody !
--->I hear the world makes wonderful melodies!
I except every product if it is good !
--->I ACCEPT good products!
I believe somebody same !
---->?????? Did you mean "I believe in people the same way?"
Don't mind my idea, just talk and share .
--->You don't have to accept my ideas, I just want to talk and share. (Oh...same as many moms here!)
I HOPE TO GIVE THE BEST TO MY SON ONLY!
MAY I ?
--->Yes you may, we want to give the best to our children also..what I am saying is..what you think is the BEST may not be what we think. Get it? So, don't keep on telling us that we don't know what is best for our children!
Who know Avent or Playtex they will produce new bottle of GLASS or PES or PPSU or NEW MATERIAL in future ?
----> Who knowS if Avent or Playtex will produce new material bottles in the future?
Dr Brown they had PC & PES NOW !
---->Dr Brown's also have PC and PES bottles now!
Best wishes to all of mothers & babies!
---> Best wishes to all mothers and babies!