I was employed as a high school English teacher at an international school in Hong Kong for several years. If you can forward an exemplar of your daughter's written work to me via PM, I'll be more than happy to give you a few pointers on how she can advance her English language skills.
"My mission in life is not merely to survive, but to thrive; and to do so with some passion, some compassion, some humor, and some style." -- Maya Angelou (1928-2014)