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發表於 06-1-27 17:15 |只看該作者

I have gotten good critique for my English poem.

Critiques for "My Dear Moon Lady"

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Critiques: 1 Average Rating: ***** (Five Stars)
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1/27/2006 Jody Dickey
this is so beautifully written, hope you do say yes, to the forums, you have so many beautiful poems that would be awesome for my spot, take care.

(The critique is for my poem as stated above: 'My Dear Moon Lady'.)






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