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cherryk74

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發表於 06-12-26 00:05 |只看該作者

問功課

想問這些句子文法對不對?

在聖誕假期，我去參觀開心動物園
In the Christmas vacation, I visit the happy zoo

這是一個非常難忘的假期
This is an extremely unforgettable vacation
I see the very big turtle in the zoo.

我看見樹上有很多雀鳥，其中鸚鵡最漂亮
I see on the tree to have very many small birds,
parrot is most attractive

我看見不同種類的蛇在地上爬行
I see the different type the snake crawls on the place

我看見長頸鹿在草地上休息
I see giraffe to rest on the lawn

我看見大象正在表演
I see the elephant to perform

我看見老虎在散步
I see the tiger to take a walk

我看見獅子懶洋洋地休息
I see the lion languidly to rest

最後還看見蜥蜴、猩猩和斑馬
Finally also sees lizard, Orangutan and zebra

thanks

:-( :-( :-(

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babebabe1120

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發表於 06-12-26 00:11 |只看該作者

Re: 問功課

其實你係講返去過zoo 既事, 應該用返past tenses

e.g.
我看見樹上有很多雀鳥，其中鸚鵡最漂亮
I see on the tree to have very many small birds,
parrot is most attractive

I saw there were many small birds on trees. I think parrots were the most attractive

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babebabe1120

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發表於 06-12-26 00:13 |只看該作者

Re: 問功課

and see 後面用bear infinitive 就得, 唔洗加 to

其實係咪一篇文? 如果係, 不如你成篇寫會好d

呢d 係小妹既愚見, 如果有任何錯漏請多多包涵

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alicevege

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發表於 06-12-26 00:14 |只看該作者

Re: 問功課

首先, 要用 past tense 啦
因為篇文章係講你係假期時參觀左個 zoo
所以係過去左 :-P

不過篇文章 d 英文好似係中文直譯
似乎有 d 問題 wor

.....

bare in mind we are always on your sides

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KaI.sIu.yAn

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發表於 06-12-26 00:14 |只看該作者

Re: 問功課

我都吾知岩吾岩...

這是一個非常難忘的假期
This is an extremely unforgettable vacation
I see the very big turtle in the zoo.

我看見樹上有很多雀鳥，其中鸚鵡最漂亮
I see many kinds of birds on the tree,
parrot is most attractive

我看見不同種類的蛇在地上爬行
I see different type the snake crawlsing

我看見長頸鹿在草地上休息
I see the giraffe rest on the lawn

我看見大象正在表演
I see the elephant is performing

我看見老虎在散步
I see the tiger takeing a walk

最後還看見蜥蜴、猩猩和斑馬
I also saw lizard, Orangutan and zebra finally.

cherryk74 寫道:
想問這些句子文法對不對?

在聖誕假期，我去參觀開心動物園
In the Christmas vacation, I visit the happy zoo

這是一個非常難忘的假期
This is an extremely unforgettable vacation
I see the very big turtle in the zoo.

我看見樹上有很多雀鳥，其中鸚鵡最漂亮
I see on the tree to have very many small birds,
parrot is most attractive

我看見不同種類的蛇在地上爬行
I see the different type the snake crawls on the place

我看見長頸鹿在草地上休息
I see giraffe to rest on the lawn

我看見大象正在表演
I see the elephant to perform

我看見老虎在散步
I see the tiger to take a walk

我看見獅子懶洋洋地休息
I see the lion languidly to rest

最後還看見蜥蜴、猩猩和斑馬
Finally also sees lizard, Orangutan and zebra

thanks

:-( :-( :-(

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cherryk74

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發表於 06-12-26 10:07 |只看該作者

Re: 問功課

請問仲有無人幫到我！

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謙仔媽咪

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發表於 06-12-26 10:32 |只看該作者

Re: 問功課

試下排成文章, 睇下岩唔岩用啦!

During my Christmas holiday, I visited the Happy Zoo. There were many different kinds of animals in the zoo.
First, I saw a very big turtle. Beside the turtle, there were many birds in the trees. The parrot is the most attractive. After that, I watch the snake house, there were many different kinds of snakes crawl on the ground.
Next, I went to the wild animals area. There was a giraffe. It was taking a rest. On the other side, a lion was sleeping languidly and a tiger was walking around.
Finally I watch the elephant show and I also saw lizard, Orangutan and zebra.
I felt excite and happy during the Christmas. This is an extremely unforgettable vacation.

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eeb

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發表於 06-12-26 12:13 |只看該作者

Re: 問功課

少少愚見:

Happy Zoo 是名字，首字母要大楷
In the Christmas vacation, I visited the Happy Zoo.

I saw a very big turtle

樹上有很多雀鳥: many birds on the trees

我看見不同種類的蛇: I saw different types of snakes

我看見長頸鹿: I saw a giraffe

我看見大象正在表演: I saw an elephant when it is performing a show

我看見老虎在散步: I saw a tiger walking

我看見獅子懶洋洋地休息: I saw a lion resting

或者夾埋做: I saw a tiger walking and a lion resting

一般叫猩猩做ape，叫大猩猩做gorilla，叫黑猩猩做chimpanzee，好少真係叫Orangutan，唔係唔啱，不過少d用。

識網友只限吹下水、交換下資訊、發揮網力，邊個認真就邊個輸。

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